Kewl :)
its definetly got the trancy feel you were after, and you dont seem to have any major mastering issues and what ever steps youve taken seems to have worked :) I would personally make your main synth more brighter to livin it up a little bit and give it a little bit more character.
Overall you have placed a great first submission for 2011 and look forward to seeing what else you got cooking.
Keep it up mate!
kewl
nice track, I quite liked it at points, the main prob I found with it was your 2 main synths sounded too similar and when they came together they sorted blurred with each other and took away from each other, it reminds me of a song but I can think of the name, its an 80's hit though...
Thanks for the review but i don't really plan to remake the song, but i just might take your advice.
Awsome
You got a great voice, sweet chugging guitar riffs, it really is a good track, the music at some points reminds me of early "Marylin Manson" wicked guitar solo aswell, when the track first started especially with just the standard sounding kick and generic synth I didnt think that it was going to bust into what it did, I like surprises ;)
Great job mate!
4/5 10/10
Sick
I really enjoyed listening to this track, "your boy" and "you" have done a really good job on this, im spiting shit while im listening and its got a mad flow, perfect for some nice singing style lyrics for the chorus as well as the obvious rap, awsome work!
btw, I dont know who you have killed but your secret is safe with me ;)
Nice work
you have done well here mate, nice and cruisy, I have a mate that has "garageband" and from what he says its not the best DAW out there but your track sounds sweet, I guess its just him being a usless fucktard eh? lol
lifes like
great job mate, you have done a very good job and I agree with you and the cord progression, one question, does "Mixcraft" record in MP3? there was another guy on NG that said his didnt and he was having probs getting a decent upload but yours sounds pretty good, espically compare to his.
Overall its a good track, a little more emphasis on the vocals to make them clearer would be good, you have a good voice, ive never used mixcraft how flexible is it for mastering and things like that?
I just got it not 5 hours ago, a trial of the latest version.
It does mix (and automatically save) as MP3.
I like it!
Its got a nice beat and a good break down, I think you have done very well here mate and it being one of your first track its quite good, I got one of my first tracks up here, I didnt remaster it (which I should have) its called "Your my X" its a good comparision for first tracks, both are very different but yours has better mastering, did you remaster it before you uploaded?
Well done!
Thanks and yes I did, as soon as I found it. I'll check your track out :).
Nice!
nice track, very frantic, sounds like last level music from a video game....is it? lol
and well done with the mastering.
Good effort here mate!
You're close! It's an attempt at remastering a track from one of the last levels of a video game.
Kewl
Kewl beat with some crazy samples over the top, it works pretty well.
Great job mate!
Sweet!
You got a great voice mate! this is a really enjoyable track!
Great work all round!
Hey, thanks a ton groove! I'm glad you like it! Took a while to make this one! ^_^
~Dylan ^_^
Hey! My names Jarad and ive been making music for a short while, I started in the music scene Dj'ing and figured that if I wanted to spin some shit why not make it my own? I still dont think im anywhere near the level yet but im always learning!
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