not bad
for a simple track its not bad mate, I think if you spend some more time on this and add some more to it you could have a decent track on your hands.
Keep it up and lets see what else you got ;)
3/5 8/10
not bad
for a simple track its not bad mate, I think if you spend some more time on this and add some more to it you could have a decent track on your hands.
Keep it up and lets see what else you got ;)
3/5 8/10
Thanks for the review :) but yeah im currently putting all my spare time fixin this up and im getting help and advice from another author on here called morgani hes a good friend of mine thats been my inseration for my new tracks but keep tuned in for the updates on the new tracks :)
Cruising
this is a nice cruisy track mate, its got an airy melodic feel to it that is quite enjoyable.
Well done mate!
The name does give meaning
I think the name sets up the imagery for the track quite well, I think the sound scape has a bit of texture to it and you have some interesting perks throughout.
Overall quite a good job mate!
Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed the experience, even if no one else seems to. I guess it's a bit dissonant for most people's taste.
Thanks for the ruminations.
Nice!
I think you have done well here mate, nice choice of synths and FX's, it all works very well together.
I would like to hear the improved version when you complete it.
Great Work!
thanks, yeah my improved version will be on soundcloud, ill probably upload it here too though www.soundcloud.com/ozmium
Cruising
This has got a nice mellow feel to it, its a very enjoyable listen aswell.
You got some good uploads mate and some skills to boot!
Well done and keep em coming!
thanks...and i will. ;D
Feeling this!
Great work here mate, I enjoyed it from start to finish!
But one thing I think it need a bit more sub bass just to top it off.
All in all awsome job!
Emotional
This is a sweet track mate, its got a lot of feeling in it and I can certainly tell that you put a lot of effort into it.
Great work mate!
thanks :) i did put a lot work into this.
Not bad
This is not bad for your second track mate!
For some constructive critisism...your drums need a little more attention to stand out in the mix and give it all a little bit more flava!
also it need more progression throughout because it sounds a little repetative espically for a track that is over 5 mins long! maybe cut it down to 3 mins and add some things like different instruments and a break down.
Hope this helps mate!
Keep it coming!
Hey! My names Jarad and ive been making music for a short while, I started in the music scene Dj'ing and figured that if I wanted to spin some shit why not make it my own? I still dont think im anywhere near the level yet but im always learning!
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