nice
Im feeling it mate, great flow and lyrics, and nice track!
It does sound like your track could be mixed a little better with your lyrics, its almost a little to soft, I know its hard to find that point where your lyrics aernt being over powered by your music but I just though id add something with a little more input than great track ;)
And I very much so appreciate your "little more input than great track" Mr. Groovet3k.
Oh yeah, I struggle almost every song trying to find that small "Sweetspot" with the mix, where you have to find the perfect volume between the track and the music. I got it to the best I can, and then said fuck it. lol
That was me then, I can't to bring you guys up to speed to where I am now....
But you know.......2 upload a day limit by Newgrounds! :D
Dub Duces. Stay Smooth.
interesting
not bad mate, its like a mix of FF and some airy synths.
interesting to listen to and well done!
Thanks!
I used an 8bit vst!
Trying to work with 8bit music now. It seems to have a huge demand for this kind of music!
B.r.,
Rafael
not bad
a bit mellow a bit cruisy and interesting for an ambient track.
one thing your kick sounds like it needs a little bit more go to bring it out that little bit.
All in all nice track mate ;)
Hey thanks for the warm review.
Agreed on the kick as well.
Glad to see you liked it as I meant for it to be something original that could loop too.
Interesting
inetesting track mate,
your fast paced kicks add a level of energy and drive but they do sound like they could have a little more beef to them or maybe a lower kick and keep the higher click sounding kick aswell.
All in all nice work mate!
I thought that too when I uploaded this. I wish the kicks were louder. Thanks for reviewing.
Not bad
sorta heavy track you got here with some interesting parts, although I dont think this is a loop.
all in all with a little more work you could have a very nice track mate!
Thanks man :)
not bad
interesting sounds used with subtle hits to keep the ear interested.
all in all not a bad effort.
Keep them coming mate!
Great work
I really enjoyed your track mate and your description was awsome aswell, it sounds like a plot to a movie.
Great work all round, I really enjoyed listening from start to finish!
Hmmm, perhaps a career in screenwriting is in my future!
Many thanks for reviewing!
not bad
not bad mate, its very distorted in parts which makes it hard to hear some of the lyrics, also the vocals all seem to be coming out of the left channel.
all in all not bad, if it was all mastered well I think some full marks would be in order
Keep it coming mate!
Yeah, thanks, man, I definitely think we may do a re-recording because of the vocal quality, as well as what you mentioned-all the vocals coming from the left channel. Thanks for taking a listen, though, man appreciate it!!
not bad
im feeling it mate! not a bad track, it could be something real special with some more work though.
Overall great work mate!
thankx
Sweet
Im digging your track mate, very well done and you certainly have improved greatly!
Now you just need to finish your track off, you got the epic build now make it POP!
Great work mate!
Hey! My names Jarad and ive been making music for a short while, I started in the music scene Dj'ing and figured that if I wanted to spin some shit why not make it my own? I still dont think im anywhere near the level yet but im always learning!
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Ambition Remix (DeathofLegacy) 