Kewl
Not a bad track mate, sort of dup stepish, and the title suits it, reminds me of someone that got the death wobbles up lol.
If I could make a suggestion, if you change you kick and snare to a more solid sound it will lift the overall sound of your track, also maybe just a slight adjustment on your mastering to clean everything up just a touch to bring it up that next teir.
Great work!
4/5 8/10
funny
that pretty funny mate, I love that review, the voice is great, but the voice gets extremely over powered and doesnt really bob out from behind the the music, some editing with the mastering to make the voice more prominent would be a very nice addition, and nice track too!
well done!
4/5 8/10
hmmm I actually made it that way on purpose so that it wasnt too prominent. I'll have to listen to it and see how I can adjust it.
EDIT: made it stick out more.
Nice beat
I like your beat mate, its pretty funky and could easily have some lyrics spat over the top of it, well done!
4/5 8/10
Dazin
not a bad little track, it reminds me of a Yoshi game on the Nes, thats not where that sound you got is from or inspired by is it?
Also, my girlfriend reckons the imagery she gets is that of a dark castle with frankenstein :D
it is a song :D
this is a cruisy song, I cant understand alot of the lyrics due to the muffled voice, but the guitar stay pretty clean throughout, I would like to hear more of your voice to appreciate that half of your track but still well done!
thx
Great job!
I do like the hip hop mate, im currently experimenting with the Aussie stuff atm, great beat great lyrics and great flow.
overall its a great track!
great job
I think you have done really well with this mate, its a great tune that you have made with your own influences.
Nice work!
thank you sir!
Envy
I think you have done an awsome effort with your imagery, your notes really explain the feeling your tryng to express as does your cord progressions, its got a sad feel to it, and in my mind it conjures pitty, but thats just what I get when I close my eyes, and I like the fact its free styled, keep it that way :)
Great work!
Mt. Dub?
you have a very raw dubstep track here mate, its got some good tones that create some feeling, and some good structure, I think with a bit of work you could have a nice dark track with some potential.
Keep it up!
Dark
its got an ominous feel to it, borderline darkness, and then light at the end of the tunnel...
great work agian mate!
this ones my own favorite of the album :)
Hey! My names Jarad and ive been making music for a short while, I started in the music scene Dj'ing and figured that if I wanted to spin some shit why not make it my own? I still dont think im anywhere near the level yet but im always learning!
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