Your animation is definitely improving and you choice of music is great ;)
I would like to see in your next addition a tad more to the story, maybe a clearer goal and a good finish, I really do enjoy a bit of anything though!
Keep em coming!
Your animation is definitely improving and you choice of music is great ;)
I would like to see in your next addition a tad more to the story, maybe a clearer goal and a good finish, I really do enjoy a bit of anything though!
Keep em coming!
Thank you for the helpful review. I agree the music was very good specially the vocal part it really help this short movie out . I am going to try to make my next submission longer.
Thanks so much for the use of your audio.
Subtle touches
great work mate!
There was a lot going on in this flash, I had to watch it a couple of times to take it all in, when the lady goes into the bushes and the music kicks in it takes it to the next level and then all the goings on at the end made it very interesting.
Keep it coming and show us what you got!
thanks for the review
yeah when the music kicks in then the real monsters come out expect for her husband who take the bowl of candy in the house to eat.
by far your best!
Your really getting the hang of flash now!
your latest work is testament to your commitment to improving your abilities and you desire to ascertain the next level.
You have really been listening to peoples input and working with it to some impressive results!
You are always improving I know I keep saying it, but you keep doing it!
Great work and keep em coming!
that's some upbeat encouraging news
I love to read intellect review they make me try harder
thanks for letting me add your music too.
Well Done!
Hello Mate!
This is another flash that honestly showcases your improvements!
I know I keep saying that you keep improving but you honestly do.
I liked the spider and all the characters really and I also noticed the voices throughout were a lot more levelled, in the last few submissions some of your voices were quite high. I also like the overall improvement on your art, from your background to your characters.
Great work!
and nice choice of music ;)
Thank you groove T3K
I am all ways happy to read a review from you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well done!
I must say, this was one of the better stickmen fights on NG.
I enjoyed the progression throughout your flash, it had a lot more substance than most of the stickmen fights which added a lot more interest for me, the suggestion about a different colour was a good idea or maybe simply adding a line for a belt or some splash of colour to differentiate the two.
Overall great work mate!
Thanks! appreciate the review : )
the sequel will most definitely have much more polish and substance, and the color issue will also be addressed. its funny how everything looks awesome until I upload it...then i catch all the glaring mistakes.
thanks again for the beat!
Constant improvement!
Your art work on your characters is always getting better and so is your overall abilities in making flash.
I laughed my ass off at the bearded lady and her/his voice :D
Like I have mentioned before your keep improving in all areas (including your choice of music ;)) which is great, just keep at it and you will be on the front page, I have confidence in you!
Also, don't let negative comment get you down, focus on the good ones! and I guarantee that the people that dis anyone's work couldn't do better if their lives depended on it ;)
Keep it coming and your more than welcome to use any of my tracks for your work!
thanks for the hopeful and constructive review and I would love to use your music in my work
I am floating on a cloud and smiling with a big grin
you are so kind
Not bad
decent animations and sound effects, and a plot that is able to be followed, overall not bad for an early submission, keep up the work mate and keep learning you have some talent :D
Thanks for the encouragement. I'll keep working on more cartoons and, as a result, get better at them.
Improving your artwork
Your art seems to be a little more defined in this one, great work here!
One thing I was thinking about, is it worth the ability to fly when the trade off is turning into an old witch?...
thank you for the review
well I read that witches use to put home made cream on their face because they believed it would make them albe to fly so I made her go from normal to a witch for that reason.
Hey! My names Jarad and ive been making music for a short while, I started in the music scene Dj'ing and figured that if I wanted to spin some shit why not make it my own? I still dont think im anywhere near the level yet but im always learning!
Age 39, Male
Lady of the night..?
Wah?
Brisbane
Joined on 6/29/10