Your animation is definitely improving and you choice of music is great ;)
I would like to see in your next addition a tad more to the story, maybe a clearer goal and a good finish, I really do enjoy a bit of anything though!
Keep em coming!
Thank you for the helpful review. I agree the music was very good specially the vocal part it really help this short movie out . I am going to try to make my next submission longer.
Thanks so much for the use of your audio.
I thoroughly enjoyed that one mate!
Its not often I laugh at flash even when it is good, but this one made me giggle all the way through it!
Made sense to me
Overall not bad, I can deal with a bit of grotesqueness and can follow the story of most random plots (atleast I think I am) besides some of it being a little full on at points and the overall plot being quite quick I think its all good!
Nice work mate!
great work mate!
There was a lot going on in this flash, I had to watch it a couple of times to take it all in, when the lady goes into the bushes and the music kicks in it takes it to the next level and then all the goings on at the end made it very interesting.
Keep it coming and show us what you got!
thanks for the review
yeah when the music kicks in then the real monsters come out expect for her husband who take the bowl of candy in the house to eat.
This is by far your best animation I have seen yet!
Your definetly getting the hang of flash art, and I noticed so much improvment from the character art, your backgrounds and you have even acheived depth in your art from your use of colours and animation.
thank you for watching and the great score
by far your best!
Your really getting the hang of flash now!
your latest work is testament to your commitment to improving your abilities and you desire to ascertain the next level.
You have really been listening to peoples input and working with it to some impressive results!
You are always improving I know I keep saying it, but you keep doing it!
Great work and keep em coming!
that's some upbeat encouraging news
I love to read intellect review they make me try harder
thanks for letting me add your music too.
im not sure how to feel?
this is something different mate!
but im not sure as to how I should feel after witnessing it...
and the demonic manga rick roll made me feel a little dirty lol
Nice work mate! think... ;)
Im glad I check the latest flash before I logged off because you have done what I hoped you would do and made a sequel!
Do me and plenty of other NG'iens... a favour and keep up with this series!
Great work mate keep them coming!
This was a really well done flash in every aspect.
I really appreciated the humour and I am now left anticipating the release of the movie...
Well done mate!
This is another flash that honestly showcases your improvements!
I know I keep saying that you keep improving but you honestly do.
I liked the spider and all the characters really and I also noticed the voices throughout were a lot more levelled, in the last few submissions some of your voices were quite high. I also like the overall improvement on your art, from your background to your characters.
and nice choice of music ;)
Thank you groove T3K
I am all ways happy to read a review from you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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