hmmm
Not one of your better ones mate, and to be honest which you can certainly be, it sounds a little like a cheap Basshunter, which is never a good thing in my opinion and to me the melody got really repetative as did the sound you used for it and by the end was getting on my nerves. I think if you made the track 2:30ish you might have made the continuity flow better without wearing out your melody, keep it coming mate!
3/5 6/10