Weel done
I enjoyed your track mate and I think you have done a great job with it!
Some extra mastering would help certain areas and maybe some sidchaining could help even out the "chaotic" areas that were mentioned to you.
Overall I think it a great track and I enjoyed listening!
Also I have noticed almost all submissions that go up throughout the day over the past week or so have been bombed even if there are really good, dont stress about what some little toad does because he cant make good music himself :)
4/5 8/10